Ka pai David. I really like this letter you wrote. I think it is great that you researched the names of the people you are sending the letter to and their address. You have also used some great points such as children only experience love from their family and kids movies should have more adventure quests. Next time I would add a few more labels to this task. For example you could have used: Writing, letter, Disney. Also remember to include you N.L and R.T
Ka pai David. I really like this letter you wrote. I think it is great that you researched the names of the people you are sending the letter to and their address. You have also used some great points such as children only experience love from their family and kids movies should have more adventure quests. Next time I would add a few more labels to this task. For example you could have used: Writing, letter, Disney. Also remember to include you N.L and R.T
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